breakdown:

shady1132:

Da Army,sound like niggas who like cocks and shove their own in idiot box/
And the only weapons in that pitiful shit... is rocks and a old black fox/
^^bad opener good wordplay 6/10
They got dog collars made of cardboard,n uniforms made of bungee cords/
Da Army's one I'd never jump abaord,so poor they got tha world record/
^^2 thumbs down 3/10
My raps are so fuckin hard....... if u write it on paper,it'll never fold/
And white powder,only thing growing on that dick is bread mold/
^^lol good punch 8/10
See,I may be 14,and u about 18,but my rhymes are left unseen/
I'm better than anyone in dat crew full of queens,who dress like Halloween/
^^ another good punch and wordplay 7/10
And it's no suprise to why you call yourself WHITE POWDER/
Cause you always got a mustache made of MAN CHOWDER!!!!!/
^^thats original good closer 7/10

overall: 31/50

white powder:

This cat’s a wanna be shady
Fuck it hes more like a wanna be mike brady
^^ no comment 1/10
Hes fuckin 2 and eleven
This cat’s done right now.. he’d be better off in heaven
^^ok punch 3/10
Shady dog you should just quit
Cause in this game dog you ain’t gonna make it.
^^better than before 4/10
Yo fuckit imma roast this rookie
Imma engulf this cat like a fat kid with a cookie
^^good punch 6/10
Don’t mess with the powder yo
You gonna be hit with every punch I throw
^^just STOP 2/10
Dog you messin with an upcoming lyrical king
Now it’s time to let the punches swing
^^ok punch 5/10
Shady your name fits cause u be hidin
This dogs finished…start the dickriding
^^better 7/10
Cause that’s the only way you gonna win…
Cause imma drop this cat like the wall in berlin
^^ok punch a lil played 5/10
Like a Nazi this boy’s about to die
Every vote this cat gets hes gatta buy
^^good closer 6/10

overall: 39/90

vote:shady...overall better verse better wordplay and better punches

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