alright the breakdown...

first up abli
Yo

Forget the checkin, I aint no chickin,
This dude needs an ass, to stick his dick in,6 decent...
Its Hydrophonic Buzz, cus when he spits its like water,
My words come at him and its almost like man-slaughter,6 dece...not really creative
Battles gotta be up by thursday but why wait,
This dude prolly wont even show, and say he forgot the date,7.5 hahah..pretty good
It's a shame aint it, when their this dull,
Cant paint a pretty picture and the paint pallet is full,7 good...original
So many "P's" where my mother fuckin "Q's"
I aint no time to be polite and say "thank-you,"7.5 good stuff...l likin the flow
I know I've won, cus this dude cant rap for balls,
He stands and practises whilst selling short-cake from the stalls,6 what...decent but not good
Look here, he's scottish, wears a skirt to his knee's,
Tell's us its tradition, yo dude, whatever, please!7 played...but whatever still funny


now for buzz

at least when i swing a punch, it's straight to the point/
you swing both ways dawg, that can only disappoint/6.5 haha...that's pretty good...well worded
if you're a little slow, i'm sayin' this g's gay an' straight/
fuckin' a hoe, then meetin' a mate to go on a date/6 not really a point to these lines...people got it ya dig
i have to get it out in the open, i'm bisexual too/
that don't mean i like guys, i just buy-anythin'-sexual dude/6.5 original and took a chance...but not a punch
you should've got some practice, before comin' to me/
i guarantee i be an emcee on a killin' spree, so ya' betta' flee/
what the fuck kinda' name is albi supposed to be beeatch/5 no no no...boo
is it alibi with one i cos i'll leave you one eyed to match/6 hmmm...i want to laugh someone make me laugh
anyway i've logged in, checked in, dropped ma rhyme, now i'm out/
i grin, leavin' goosebumps in yo' skin, now it' time, to knock ya out/5 stupid...but whatever...all in all not a great verse.. but decent...

vote -abli

he just had a little bit more original stuff...but both did well