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Old 05-05-04, 04:10 PM   #5
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...ILL...:

Discharge you wack as hell you wack as rhymin isnt gone get ya far
My rhymes leave ya behind the window like yo wack ass mike myers avatar
^^ill ass opener good personal 9/10
His record he 9-0 becuz hes battlin newbs but ya cant beat me (G)
Someon stop this bitch discharge b4 I charge this battery....(get it)
^^another hott ass punch good shyt so far 8/10
You made you dont get no pussy so ya sux dick for a doller...
This bitches rhymes is so bitched they make you turn blue the same color as night crawler...
^^this bar is stretched but stilla good punch 7/10
He pop wit fuckin water guns he dont fuckin pop with nines....
He battles newbs that dont know how to set it up in front lines.....
^^lol another personal and punch good shyt 8/10
So go ahead and get ya crew votes becuz true votes is what ya lack....
Becuz now im like the terminator so if ya beat me ill be back....
^^ ill closer good wordplay in 1st line 7/10

overall: 39/50

discharge:

for u this battle will be uphill, you could have hivs and still not be' ill"//
beatin me is your dream, that you cannot fufill,becuz you lack "skill"//
^^good use of multies but it didnt flow at all bad opener 5/10
ull be my next kill,u must like losin i guess it gives you a thrill//
ok ill tell the truth, let the beans spill,leave rapbattles stay home and chill//
^^nothing interesting 6/10
you lost this you should detect, realize the fact that uve been wrecked//
your punches were not only weak but incorrect,you clearly cant make them connect//
^^gettin better 7/10
from a bitch like u what can we expect, u wont get one vote its called "wack mc neglect"//
heres the truth with-all-respect, if you think your rhymes are sweet get yourself checked//
^^stretched bars and seemed force OK punch 6/10
now right here its time for the truth admit,you cant and never will be able to spit//
your rhymes are just plain shit, so next time think before you right garbage and pres"submit"//
^^weak finisher point blank 4/10

overall:28/50

vote: ....ILL....... his punches and personals were ill by far the best verse i have ever seen from him....discharge this is by far the worst thing u have ever dropped in your life..u didnt interest me in any way punches were OK no personals all u had was sick multies and some wordplay
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