breakdown:

fine mind:

shady baby, your not a man your a ladie, you get played in my game easerly/
Im gonna teach this boy a lesson till he can't hear him speaking/
this boy better flee cuz im like a killing spree, im fine mind wild my shit an't mild/
you get your face knocked off like door hinges till i start hearing painful winges/
this boy can't rap, he's like steped back for my foots ready to stamp/
im underrestedmated, you can't never test me baby, i'll jump your charts off like they just jumped off stage scared/
i'll coeme out from the night to light a firework stiked with a match, set the match back pulled n ready to strike fire set off n collided into your window burnin u living/
this boy's already done this was fun while it lasted, you just bin out runned/
stunned bitch listen your wishin i think you got a death wish/
im being rushed now plz hush i got ta get of the internet, cause everyones pissed off/
fuk it i'll let my flow finish you off/

i wont comment on your rap because it wasnt a rap it was a story u need some structure u had no flow and half your bars didnt even rhyme well im lying MORE THAN HALF YOUR BARS DIDNT RHYME!!! no im lying again NONE OF YOUR BARS RHYMED!!! stop rappin damn

overall:10/50

shady1132:

U think you hot....but you look like u bout to orgasim all the time/
Esspecially since "mat,rat,gat,and sat"......are ur only ryhmes/
^^nice ass punch felt that 8/10
U white,yet you act black,talking in slang and rocking Sean John/
Ur mom probably wish you weren't born,cause she acts in porn/
^^ok but im sorry to break it to you john and porn dont rhyme lol 5/10
Maybe if there was cure for STD,she'd be able to get some real shit/
And if she could get rid of flabby tits and hanging down clit/
^^ok punch 4/10
But that won't ever happen......... cause ur pops got no legs/
But to get with ur mama...... he ain't even have to beg/
^^gay bar 2/10
You like to act all tough,but you a queer,who get pick on by his peers/
^^this goes with nothing so im not counting it
I got rhymes longer than DOCTOR OCT.,so don't even try to block/
See,my list goes"Em,50,Nas,and Jay",yours go "dick,prick,cock n schumk/
^^ok finisher 6/10

overall:25/50


vote:shady....like it wasnt obvious...shady u didnt havea hott verse so against almost anyone else on this board with that battle u would have lost u got potential but u need to elevate if your gonna battle vets or at least people wit more skill....as for fine all i can say is put down the mic and pick up a book

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