Terrible. lumidaz automatically wins because shady is so bad, and lumidaz had a nice personal at the end. lum: some of your bars were stretched, and the prison sentence wordplay was pretty whack, otherwise a pretty nice verse.

Ok you're honestly telling me this doesn't count, so here goes:

lumidaz had a nice personal at the end, with the Shady no whatever. That is what a good punch is. You had problems at the beggining with stretching your lines, but otherwise had at least decent vocab and nice rhymes, made it refreshing to read. Shady's verse sucked. No punches that hit hard, painful to read (not just because of structure) and that last line was just terrible, didn't even make sense. lumidaz at least tried some wordplay and original shit. battle over. period.

this line itself could have won the battle too:

"
Cover you in rhymes like lyrical sediment,
Man, your spits hold you back like a speech impediment,"

shady had nothing of that calibur. his whole verse together wasn't of that calibur.

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