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ok a$e stole dis 1 4 da simple reason he came wit beter punches way better mix yo verse was simple as it can be u a elavate u used good vocab tho
a$e-
bestline-u can still feel da "heat" when it "rain" when i "cock dat thunder"/
i'm bout my "bread dog, it's about you i "wonder"/
nice
worsteline-nune
your verse gets a 8/10 overall
mix-
this bitch A$e aint even in this, just another victim on my win-list..
i insist you enlist with rappers to assist your game, to me you dont exsist..
all right but slacked after that
worseline-u fuck around wit dat, we'll make u feel da heat like sunbeams/
it's more than a "track" how i run things, it's a marathon/
not 2 good
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