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Old 05-05-04, 09:23 PM   #14
PoLiFicK
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From: bedrock
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ok nice drop the both of u both threw some ok punches wit ok structure and a descnet flow

dp-

bestline-You Attack opponents after someone else goes the distance,
And then cause yourself the authentic definition of a lyricist,


dat was tite

worsteline-You Attack opponents after someone else goes the distance,
And then cause yourself the authentic definition of a lyricist,


not da best start

overall yo verse gets a 8.4/10

classic

bestline-Start with you tied to a mack truck detaching your breast
Throw darts to deflate your silicone to a masculent chest

nice

worsteline-nun

overall yo verse gets a 9.3/10

winner-da classic
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