aiight jay you took this one easily cause your flow and rimes where better but you need to work on changin up the rhyme scheme like this:if your mind is so fine, how come you cant structure a line?/
before you even start think bout how you gonna resign/
takin it straight to fine mind, spit shit so hard it'll make ya go blind/
try some new shit and re-define, the way i put bitches out of mind/

you rapped of the word fine about 4 times it gets tiresum besides that it was good

Fine mind you need to improve your stuff was just how can i say it not that good you can improve though also two suggestions, work on flow and work on rhyming because some of it didn't

my vote:Jay Dogg