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Old 05-05-04, 10:19 PM   #5
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aiight this was a wack battle... foe real nothing hott really u had 1 or 2 punches that were ok but nothing that was interesting...your structure and flow was on no wordplay no meta no multies....

.Flos. u had a wack verse too but im gonna have to give this battle to you because of the opener it was stretched but still a good bar...your second bar about the cable guy was good too but shorten the legnths so that they are even or close to even...water gun line is played but still was decent...

vote:.flows. the first 2 bars won this but both of u need some hotter punches and personals...metas wordplay and multies...good shyt

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