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Old 05-05-04, 10:34 PM   #15
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this was a hott battle shadows edge u had some killer punches and that hott personal your wordplay was sick and some nice multies..structure was a lil messy but it flowed well so that dont matter...

best bar:Flip scripts? Best flip the pencil and erase your text
My train of thought alone leave your tracks in wrecks

worst bar:Must I re-iterate? This whack kid is just fourteen
Audio L’s iterate because his voice sound like a queen

overall: 7.5/10

L.I also had a ill verse but i just wasnt feelin it as much as shadows some of your bars were stretched...you had some ill punches and some good personals..good meta's and wordplay was good..i think if your structure was better u would have had a hotter verse

best bar:The way your record’s goin, theres no chance of bein an expertise…
And it doesn’t help that you loss category is more populated than the Japanese…

worst bar:Loss by loss added up when against skill, seems like your losses are in sync as the rockettes....
Sarcasm shows the fear because of a rough road schedule, and u dont perform well wit vets...

overall:6.5/10

vote:shadows edge i just think he had a better overall verse with better punches...L.I had a sick verse too but shadows took this one

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