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Yo triple took this real nice he had some sharp word play and took it to ya with punches good format and all around better style from what i saw
however when reading your lines i started to figure what ya were accomplishing there
but start simple my man then work up rap to rap my man then you can intertwine your shit as it goes on and you get better
My advise just check out some battles veiw whats doin it whats not and read criticizm holla back yall KEEP STRIVIN ITS WHY WE HERE!
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