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Old 05-06-04, 02:18 AM   #19
JPoll
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the breakdown...

first king solo



here's my shit

Nice record……I guess pre-writin paid off cuz its got ure ass high rankin
And nice avatar……I just got one question, what the fuck is ure mom spankin
9 hahah that's funny shit...
Rhymes explosive……have ure head explodin next time u get a Deadly Vision
Alakazam!......I’m a magician and POOF! I just took away all ure ammunition
6 stupid...hmm hella stupid
U never hit……can’t knock shit up cuz like ure nine ure always firing blanks
This ure end……pack ure shit up and leave cuz I make a habit of retiring wanks
7 decent...not really any sort of punch though
Flow is wack……don’t u know that shit don’t work, u better try another way
I be 007……if u drop out this shit right now I might let u Die Another Day
9 oooohhhh shit...hahah that's tight
Ass is bored……I don’t need to try, I’m just doin this shit cuz it’s killin time
Bars are stretched…… I know I’ll win cuz all ure ass will be doin is fillin lines
7 decent...fairly good flow so far also
Real killa……u shud understand this cuz I’m a use my methodz to murder u
Never get fame……you been here nearly a year and still nobody has heard of u
8 haha pretty good pretty good
Shit predicted……man I got a Deadly Vision that’s how all this shit was planned
Sayin goodbye……I beat u so bad the admin won’t need a reason to have u banned!!
7.5 pretty tight man

good verse...bars a little stretched but good shit man...two fucking rad lines



and now for deadly vision

This will be an easy win...hahaha

http://www.faceparty.com/member_zoo...&img_id=6347124 (His Gay Pic)


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Originally Posted by will a peer
wow ok nice pics i guess
ur a homo i like how u threw up the sing u look so gangster lol


^^Fruitcake You inept-to-cope,Set-to-choke on wat could have been your only hope...
Face tHa Factz, Gettin ME on LD Roster is the only way u'll make a vote..
7.5 decent
MM got Seamen that'll rape ya throat,just straight Neverous, im serious!..
Nicky Fletcher..haha You've got less chance of 'giving birth'-to-rap then a 13 year old virgins period..7 decent not great
King??, "You Aint Drugged Yet", ILL Stack This Kids "Organs On Shelves" Leaving His Stomach "Up-Set"...
You Like A Swade Puppy 10-3..Still a noob "In-side" So How He Rocking A "Core-Vet"...8 good concept but weird wording

Quote:
Originally Posted by Koopa Troopa
you the guy are the girl.....


^^Herb I'll Cut your "dick" in "half" cause you "Bi-Sexual"...
You Could "Ram" "Heads" With "Einstein" you still aint "Intelectual"...8 haha pretty tight...not great but pretty good
Stop lying about your reverse Sexuality, I kno u checking out yo leader Killa bwoy!! but you "Contact-Dick-Son" (Contradiction).. weird structure...smart though...8
British bastard from UK!! Enough Tutoring you couldnt practice my Skill "So Dont Master us...
You out of "ammo" and you talk about "Blast-en-us"(blasphemus)"... 7.5 decent ...
Lyrical Destruktion?? Bitch My keystyles just be wild, Go copy and Paste ya Rhymes...
Due date? Throw ya Watch Away Cause you’re a Fuckin “Waste-of-Time”...6 stupid...i'm not a big fan...crappy line...doesn't fit with this smart verse
Its like a Fuckin Waste of lines, you sound like a preachers high Whines....
Im The Type to shoot Myself in The Dome… Just to give you a “piece-of-my-mind....8 ahha that was okay though...very generous of you...


The end. Good Bye Biaaatch.

anyways here are the breakdowns...of points

King Solo...46.5/60
Deadly visionz...44.5/60

v-king solo...

respect to both emcees though...good shit




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