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Old 05-06-04, 02:35 AM   #16
JPoll
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choppa...
standard flow...pretty good concept....cept a couple of the words didn't rhyme and shit....but overall decent to average flow and structure...didn't come as hard as you ussually do...you are alot better then this verse...but it was okay...

deadly...
was off and on ...but when it was on it was HOT...people don't think your structure/flow is good...but it's just because they don't know how to read or something...because it was good...and hot disses...funny shit good job

it was a pretty close battle but i gotta give it to deadly
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