first i'd like to say, good verses fellas.

my honest vote would have to go to bigneks in this one. his verse was a little bit more complex and flowed slightly better. mad dog, parts of your verse were rough, but decent. you did okay for a new battler to this site, however you got bested in this one. practice makes perfect. work on your personals and your vocab, as well as some metaphors and you should improve some.

........just my honest feedback. keep up the good work battlecats. one.

s.v.

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