choppa - started well.. pretty obvious concept but still a nice name flip.. but u fell off after that.. the 'hippo', 'Jacksons' an 'computer freezin' lines were all wack an old.. the 'ali and reeves' line was bad too.. Christopher Reeves can stand.. the majority of the verse was stretched.. cut out the un-needed words to neaten it up an add a flow..

DV - your 'quote' punches were rubbish.. u didnt actually incorporate the first two quotes in the punch.. and you spoke of 'penetratin your girls clit'.. how? plus it's a wack 'sex' line.. closer was also weak.. nothin stood out.. too many played 'sex/gay/dick' lines.. flow was literally non-existant.

v/ choppa.

Edged it in a weak battle.

Vote on one of these or be bugged until you do:

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=121238
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=122505
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=121685

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