~SAINT SINNER~
From: Sindicate City, U.S.A. |
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IP:
shady.........you need to elevate my friend. work more on your vocab, punchlines, metaphors and delivery. you had a couple of decent ideas, but didnt make the best of them. also, some of your verse didnt make sense.........sorry bud.
powder.....you take this one. you need some work as well, but you came hard enough to win this battle........your verse was put together a little bit better and that was the key to your victory. also, good luck with your crew.
keep on keeping on fellas.....i hope to see big things from you both in the future. one.
s.v.
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Originally Posted by Nick Fletcher.
I don't drive an Eclipse, they're chickmobiles. 
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QUESTION: Is it even possible to improve upon perfection???
ANSWER: CRHYME SINDICATE
"I remember this one time I thought I was wrong........but I was mistaken." -Unknown
R.I.P. Jonathan "ONE MAN BAND/TERUMOTO" Nigro. Goodbye brother. God bless the dead. One love.
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