Skadoosh!
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IP:
wtf???
i can't believe these votes
foe real
check this dog, ure flow was on i gotta give that to u, feelin ure verse from start to finish. u had a gud structure goin on apart from one or two lines that stretched a bit. ure punches tho...DAMN...u were just spittin basic lines. u lacked creativity throughout the whole spit. there was probably one multi in there that wasn't gud. not much for personals either and matrix shit...PLAYED! homo shit...PLAYED!
elevate playa, get more creative and use more originality, work on ure wordplay and rhyme scheme and hit more personals in there.
N Sight
ure spit wasn't all that good but compared to what foe real spat it was superior by far. ure flow was on and i was feelin ure verse just as much. u had better structure sumthin that u perfect all the time i think...cant ever fault u on that apart from u cud try a more complex structure sumtimes. punches were there a couple of hard ones but mainly average u know. not much for creativity but there was a glimpse or two. an ok multi to begin ure spit, ended wit a couple of nice metas, not really any personals in there i dont think. and one line that i wud say is gonna come back against u is this
I'm molestin kids, even less than my best can rest you bitch..-
straight up sumone is gonna use that against u in the near future.
u need to elevate ure punches, get more originality and creativity, work on ure rhyme scheme and wordplay, beef them up, hit wit more personals and shit and perhaps try a more complex structure, see if it works for u...if not keep with the one ure workin with cuz it be gud.
Pretty average spit from N Sight.
Well weak spit from Foe Real.
V/ - N Sight
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