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Old 05-06-04, 01:05 PM   #10
Kingz
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Shady, why the fuck you entered this tournament,
Im gona diss you while you sit there like sum mantlepiece ornament,
Cover you in rhymes like lyrical sediment,
weak
Man, your spits hold you back like a speech impediment,
For my last sentence, it was life prisonment, (prison sentence, lyric sentence)
decent
If your rhymes were personified they'd be Christopher Walken,
Aint got no rhthm just stick to your CD walkman,
lol mad me laugh
With those headphones in your ears,
Im spittin venem more toxic trhan britney spears,
nice wordplay
Your mam so fat she cries gravy in her tears,
Think your shady well the spolights on you,
So many eminem wannabes your shady no.1 1 3 2,
lol nice finser

6/10 ok vocab but horrible flow

Lumidaz,you always be gettin ur dog nutered......cause it got big balls/
But the only reason you doing that shit......... is cause you got none/
Ur rhymes softer........ than the stomach of Fat Joe or Big Punt/
btw its big pun hahaha didnt rhyme well
The only way u cuttle........is with ur dog,which you only hump/
And it hurts too,cause ur dick got nothing but a bunch of bumps/
ha crap rhyming
The reason ur mom neglects you,is cause Osama fucked ur mama/
Then comes Saddam to join....who you willingly hump like a llama/
sucks so much its sooo funny
And u think u a thug cause you be rocking rocAwear and a pair of TIMS/
So many assholes out there......your number one.....LUMIDAZ/
eh?

2/10

vote/lumidaz
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