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beefin with jay? nah u not able da size of my gun a make u tear quick-
u "take bars from da cat in da outlaws" datz y they call u "fatal lyrikzz"-
(think about it)

^^ QUIT WIT DA DAMN "GET IT" stuff...lol..decent opener tho


after im done clappin da ratchett,ya fam a be at ya wake grabbin ya casket-
quit rap u just makin a "ass" out yaself on da "net" like u "sat in da basket"-


^^ Nice wordplay

dunny but after i "bus(t)" all u gettin is a "1 way ticket" da hell-
ya boys aint gon be "throwin pennie's in water" but they gon be in a hospital "wishin" u "well"-
^^ solid closer w/more good wordplay




From: CaLiFoRniA !!!!!!!
Status: Online
IP: 6C7A 3231


Fatal Is My Game Aint Believe Me Read My Name
Actin Like You Dont Know After This U Better Run FOr Shame

Decent opener...

Aiyo dawg, SPELLING YOUR NAME OUT DOWN THE LEFT SIDE OF YOUR VERSE IS GAY AND POINTLESS, NOT TO MENTION UNORIGINAL AND PLAYED.


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