S. Carter, you may have had a chance if you got away from the "step one crap" That killed ya dogg, sounded like some new kids on the block shit. If you were going to do this, I would have expected some real hard hitting punches, which were not really evident.

Yung Caesar, your style was alright, after reading yours I thought you might be in some trouble. Try making your punches a little bit more crisp, meaning if you can take out words that you don't neccisarily need, do it! Nice verse thought,


Vote- Caesar