Lyrical method... yo shit was hott nice flow and multis. i liked how you kind of mixed multis wit punches nice flow and structure was ok so it was koo.... the only thing i would suggest working on is structure
15/20
Infamous your spit was ok but what killed it was the lack of vocabulary. get a dictionary B or sometn get bigger words and flow.your strucutre was good but flow and punches were off. so the main thing you should elevate on is Vocab
8/20
Aight i think yall know who is the winner but let me say it any ways....... Lyrical method
Can yall vote on this shit too
heres the link
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=111956