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Old 05-06-04, 01:46 PM   #14
Da Vinci
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Alright Lyrical Method take this ones cause he had harder hitting punches. Being a battle its all about the punches.

Infamous
beat this faggot up with just one verse
r.i.p., man cauze ya moms is buyin you ya hearse
-this was a recycled verse, if your going to use it spice it up a bit

i'm infamous and don't i look dangerous
ya method is weak and ya vatur should be ya swelled up face
ya mother didn't want you born in da first place
ya father's sperm shoud've landed somewhere safe
you a bita and ya wordz don't amaze
-This were not many punches here and use just used 2.5 bars

that's why you be losin ya battles like MIXX everyday
you hopin this da last time we battle
you a snake that sneaks to snitch and i'm da ones that rattle
-not a bad punch here
my rhymes are toxic like britney spears
but this is my version where you sweat in fear

this was all right, failry dry just keep elivatin and battle'n.

Lyrical Method, try to work on your structure a bit, your lines were fairly long, you got the punching down though, battle some more and your will some more.
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