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Old 05-06-04, 03:04 PM   #1
Da Vinci
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For starters "stop" "doin" "this" "to" "all" "yer" "lines"
Moving on....

opener- Both kidna weak but I give it to Lil chunky
structure- Infamous J, nice bar style,
punchline- Infamous J, but next time maybe take out the filler punches when you don't need em.
creativity-nothin really here, both came straight
multis-Infamous J you had some nice ones in the middle,
flow- these were both kinda shitty for flow, tought to read through, check spelling and shit,
personals- Infamous J, you had a few that were kinda felt
enjoyed- Both alright verses,
closer- I give this one to Chunky,

All in all this was an alright battle, my vote goes to Infamous J
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