You need to give up rap, cuz for flowin' you have no nack
U need to watch channel 183 so u can "discover" your wack(183 is discovery channel)
solid punch 8
This a battle, its a slaughter, let me get it ovet wit'
I'm a call u "huggies" cuz ya rhymes are "full of shit"
nice meta 8
Give it up hmie, cuz an ill emcee you definitely are not
If ya rhymes "vacationed on the sun" they wouldn't be "hot"
nice meta 6
Ya rhymes are old an played they could never touch mine
U must of wrote'em in "antartica" cuz they "frozen in time"
another nice meta
Its over son, its clearly apparent this battle's mine
Shit! I don't even need a closer I killed u wit my first 2 lines
lol decent finisher

7/10 nice drop

mind, half ya shit didnt rhyme!!
i'll make your hole face shatter, and listen to broken peices chuckle/
I just stuffed cocain up your nose that uv snuffed and sneezed blood/
i come out of night, go hunt for prey like an owl, strike a match when you come in sight, i coat you in petroliam petrol/
watch you set ablze start haloosinating in a delusional fase/
leave ya sulking in heaven, when i'll be laughing when i go to hell/

look u need to look in the tutorials to improve your skills,
ya ish we ok it jus didnt rhyme

2/10

v/ triple

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