even yo hippo avatar tellin u 2 leave he waving u 2 get off wit his hand..........
deadly vision beat me???? dass when ali stop shaking and christopher reeves stand......
yo shit need practice,yo open mics not hype,shit is wat MM about.............
i reverse yo verse,cuz da day u beat me is when grand master flash come back out....

some hot shit by choppa, nice structure, it read well and i enjoyed reading it
you need a few mor em multies to improve the flow and a few more personal but other than that its tiight

You On A "Strict" "Diet" Of "Gay Men" So Stay On Ya "Read-Ya-Men-t"...
There Goes Ya Reign…I’d Steal Ya Girl… But I know Her “Head-Bites”..
You a fag yo whole Flow Makes Me “url” and I aint Talkin about Web-sites..

u had some funny shit there but the gay jokes are waaaay played, they aoint effective no more, flowed ok, good meta's
structure was awful tho so hard to read

v/choppa beter structure and an easy to read verse

__________________