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Old 05-06-04, 09:06 PM   #8
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From: holdin down the three-one-three
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aww nice battle but i was disappointed by real thourough
ok breakdown for r.t.
real bad structure
overal verse is *6*
kinda wack i seen some good shit from u but this was bad i must be having an off day
my favorite "line" frum ur verse
Packin-Is-A-Ritual! Pierceing Eyes The Way I'm 'Attackin-Ya-Visuals'!! My Raps-A-Pit-Bull!! Real Leave "Mixx Broke" By 'Flashing His Intials'!
u need to throw more punches
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mixx
nice verse good meta4's and similies nice shit
good punches good structure
verse is an *8*
my favorite line from ur verse
Eating you like a main course, slappin the taste outta ya mouth..
im like 'clumsy electricians' cause i'll 'knock all ya lights out'..
good drop guys keep workin and elevatin
my vote mixx
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