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Old 05-06-04, 09:08 PM   #11
E Looch
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lol ummmm check it

infamous um your opener i wasnt fealin at all brah the punch was stretched and it never really connected either and your closer was pitiful there wasnt even a punch shit just made me shake my head an scroll down real quick and the rest of your verse yo maybe had 2 good lines to me i didnt feal it at your structure was about the best thing about your verse try workin on closin your battles better and staying consistent with good solid punchs and dont use as much filler

discharge your opener was decent good mulites in it kept it flowin pretty well punch wasnt that good though and the closer was decent but try not to feed of his verse like that but you did pretty good to use it against him but dotn do that to much and th rest of your verse was pretty nice good punchs and vocab good drop just work on your structure and take unnessecary words out of your lines to help

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