View Single Post
Old 05-06-04, 09:58 PM   #28
FLooZe
.Don't Looze The Flooze.
 
FLooZe's Avatar
 
Posts: 1,313
From: canada
IP:

vinman,i got to give dis battle to you cause lyricals opener didnt rhyme,and his sturucture was soso.he had OK wordplay,but you were better.vinman,i think you should find different rhyming words,not just seen and seen.i think you should also bring your lines closer together,not so far apart.lyrical demon,that was a very weak battle.try to elevate.
vote:vinman
__________________


The Definition. period.
Send a message via MSN to FLooZe