damn j-da took this battle

fine-your lines were way too long.....u need to shorten them up......and u didnt really even rhyme in your verse.......u need to fix your structure

j-da-u took this easy u started off whack but u picked it up......personally i didnt like your closer i thought it was grimey....but it was very creative....u had some ok punches.....u took this easily.....but u need to work on your consistancy