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Old 05-06-04, 11:27 PM   #13
Triple_N
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Good battle y'all, Breakdown: Afterwood

flow clear as water, so come harder than ya pet avatar, 50 cent
Yur simply shit, you could spit on every mix-tape, and still aint in-da-MIXX

Good opener

Im endin it, you will never lick me, but I bet in your spare time you lick pipes
Plus yo punchin aren’t hittin like you agreed on a fix’d fight

Weak punch

I been tight, like me and da homies in a big fight, or a ziplock’d hemp bag
Youv’e been trash, we wouldn’t feel you if you wrote your lyrics on a zig-zag

Weak punch

You talk hard but you don’t live dat, b/c inside yur soft and I can sense that
So you went on and enlisted, in a arsenal of sorry hoes basically cuz you need help

Weak Punch

I be packin heat, you only strapp’d in seat, wen securely wearin ya seatbelt
Im roundin second, headed for home on da microphone with astounding aggression

Weak Punch

And if you win this battle, I know u was askin 4 votes like a student council election
MY SHIT IS POTENT LIKE A PUREBREAD, & YUR PEDIGREE IS MIXX
U BARELY EXIST, LIKE A SINGLE PENNY YOU DON’T EVEN MAKE SENSE(CENTS)
Good wordplay
Overall: 6/10

Breakdown: Mixx

Scorch ya chin wit a 'fiery blow', so hard it leaves sooty handprints
and makes ya fuckin 'arteries glow'..

Ok punch

Harmin this hoe till his talkin cease, cus 'pacifist movements' is the
only time u 'walk with the piece!'..

Whoa! nice punch

Yo, I drop dominant punches Im God to greet when I
break-n-puncture both knees..
Never try-n-oppose me cause Ill leave you more shook than Eskimo

Kinda weak

brides with cold feet..
No one wants your shit, it's the truth no hate, Putting your C.D in
your 'blood stream' is the only way it'll ever 'circulate'..
Shit im too fast for thinkin, you get smacked every time you blinkin,

Good punch

and like a bad 'kitchen installer' you cant let the loss 'sink in'..
Spittin with bullets, your lines couldnt blast a shell, with full
gauges already dispelled..
Plasterin dealt, triggered you from the 6 fasten ya belts, shots
sending ya crashin to hell..
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Decent closer
Overall: 7/10
Mixx won but just barely his walk wit peace punch was best in whole battle thats what won it
Vote: Mixx
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Then wonder why when presenting there's to others...no one looks twice
Because at the end of the day, you get what you give
So, when you consumed with his...don't get mad when everyone else is
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