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Old 05-07-04, 04:14 AM   #17
BigTony.Self
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Opponents beware of this fake supervillan/
Offences include being a bitch...and actin feminine/
How the hell can u call me out...and expect to win/
U'll get squashed like a coke can...made of alluminum/
Ur rap aint a contest...bitches be pukin at them/
The only way u'll be sick...is if i give u food poisonin/
Ur best to no-show now...coz i dont label u a foe/ (foe = challenge)
I guarentee u only spit best...when u choke/
Now let me give u an honest vote...just to make things clear/
I've already won this battle...ur response'll just kiss my rear/

IT SHOULD HAVE SAID.......
to all Oppenents u should know this man u best beware
fake supervillain over there gets burned like electric chairs

offences include bein a bitch and actin type feminen
why the fuck you call me out u couldnt've expected to win

WITH WHAT I WAS WORKIN WITH IT AT LEAST FLOWED

On the other hand here was the other guy
mad dog...how can i blame you for your rage mutt?//
you cute little thing...all bark and no bite, thats symptoms of a spayed pup,//

rabid beast? or just jizm on the lips of this average freak?//
im a savage king, ruling everything on this atlas, please call the sire, his majesty...//

Yo maddog i shall not blame for your a mutt in rage
all bark no bite, symtoms of a pup that needs to be spayed

Rabid beast ,nuthin cummin from the lips of this average freek
im a savage king, rule everything on the atlas just call me your majesty

..........yall just need structural improvement and better word choice for flow and always preview, but now comes vote time and for this im gonna leave it alone i hope u2 the best of luck and keep striven
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