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...i'm da nicest...
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Man I Have Been Grounded From The PC...
KID U SHOULD NOT EVER SAY THAT IN A BATTLE IT DOESNT HELP U LOL
Check Dis Shit...
Aiyo...3...2...1....
Aight..Check It...
Da Flow Peeps, Feel Me..
Check It..3...2...1...
WTF WAS THAT SHIT? MAN....
This Cats Man-Hood Is Strapped-Back, Mindboggled With Trapped-Raps,
Hear Your Back Crack, With Two Lyricals Smacks From This Spittin Crap/
HEAR UR BACK CRACK,I LIKE THAT.....BUT...TRAPPED RAPS/SPITTIN CRAP DOES NOT RHYME............
I Ain't Trying To Fuck With This Bitch, He's Been Around Da Block,
Flopping Wit Stocks, Syphlis Infested, Cause Too Many Herbs Riding His Cock/
HAHA,SYPHILIS LINE IS DECENT...
Gettin Your Name Well-Known, Shit Only Cause The Greatest Merked You,
Disturbed You, My METAS Will Haunt Your PHYSICS Like A 9'o Clock Curfew/
DONT LIKE THE CURFEW LINE.......U COULD'VE HIT HIM HARDER WIT HIS NAME
No 'Bodies' Impressed With The Punches Your Spitten, There Not Well Driven,
Non-Lyrical Hitting, 12 Tomorrow, Shit Dog Its Freestyle, Not Well Written/
WELL THOSE PREWRITTEN PUNCHLINES ARE PLAYED..EVEN THOUGH IN THIS CASE IT IS A PERSONAL
You Challenging Me, Is Like Comitting Suicide, It's Just Not A Smart-Move,
Repping Da MM Crew, Cause These Murderous Methods Leaving You Lead Threw/
VERY WEAK CLOSING........
~R~
Stricts great, no, hes dope cus hes the LBC Text Champion and on a mixtape..
UR STYLE IS DIFFERENT....IT TAKES A MINUTE TO CATCH UR FLOW...
Your ready to loose...like virgins in sex tapes, ya recs fake, get it in shape..
.....Well..... your bars anyway....but......didnt you say..
FLOW FALLIN OFF A LOT MAN.........
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Originally Posted by Re$TricTed
Stretched Bars Allowed...and Centering Allowed Too..
I would get on ya crew Eminem but...I like 3.0.4.'s,..oops, I forgot..thats you..
Only time this herb has a chance of winning....is playing the lotto wit plants..
DECENT PUNCH....BUT I REALLY DONT LIKE THE FLOW
..Give Stricts neck a slit and slant...not talking bout whats inside his pants..
You break mics, could touch ya post and still couldnt feel your verse and flow..DECENT PUNCH,BUT CONCEPT IS PLAYED
Kid blows, hes rich cus he has a $ sign in his name,guess he stacks dough..
Like selfish pot smokers he never pass L's, hit wit eggs like shot wit shells..
My method is murderous,ha,but if I murder this herb my method is goin to hell
OK SOME FEEDBACK..I WASNT TOO IMPRESSED WITH EITHER VERSES........
UMM.....I DEFINITELY LIKED RESTRICTED'S FLOW AND MULTIES BETTER...META...UR FLOW IS EXTREMELY HARD TO READ......IN AUDIO THIS MIGHT SOUND AIGHT......BUT IN TEXT.......UR KILLIN UR PUNCHES WIT UR HORRIBLE FLOW......OK THE PLANT LOTTO LINE WAS PRETTY ORIGINAL......BUT THE SEX TAPE,FEEL UR VERSES, N EGG SHELLS THOSE ARE PLAYED CONCEPTS.............I STILL FEEL UR PUNCHES WERE HARDER....BUT UR FLOW......MAN,I REALLY WAS NOT FEELIN IT........U WENT ON N ON BEFORE THERE WAS A WORD TAHT EVEN RHYMED,N WHEN I GOT AROUND TO IT I HAD TO GO BACK TO SEE WHAT IT RHYMED WITH........IF U HAD RESTRICTED'S FLOW N MULTIES U'D WIN THIS WITH EASE...BUT UR FLOW TOOK AWAY SO MUCH.............I'M ALWAYS ONE TO SAY PUNCHES WIN BATTLES...BUT U RUINED UR PUNCHES .....U NEEDA REALLY LOOK OVER UR SHIT N TRY TO READ IT FROM SOMEONE ELSE'S PERSPECTIVE......I READ IT A FEW TIMES.......I HAD TO READ METAS MANY TIMES TO CATCH THE FLOW..............U ONLY TOOK IT BY A MARGIN,I FIRST CAME OUT UNDECIDED N WAS GONNA POST A TIE,BUT THEN U DID HAVE BETTER PUNCHES......SO U TAKE IT.........BUT MAN,WORK ON FLOW.....
DISAPPOINTED IN THIS BATTLE
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