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Old 05-07-04, 06:27 AM   #8
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Closer than expected.. Duke came personal with one or two decent punches.. but it was all rather basic.. Native was alot more creative an witty.. punches are more original an subtle.. Duke`s first line was a direct feed which goes against him.. plus in the middle your line`s were stretched an knocked off the flow.. but prop`s for actually gettin` personal an dissin` Native.. as opposed to most idiot`s who jus` rant an rave.. Native.. concise, witty an fresh.. structure an rhyme scheme was on point so it flowed easily.. opener an closer were dope.. an you didn`t fall off throughout.. good job.

v/ Native.
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