Good battle. SInce this is short I'll go through it line by line
xFuriousox -
ayo...
good thing you said ayo
bring venom to this `battle` like snakes with `rattles`//1
you tryna flow against my current but ya boat has no `paddles`//2
not bad... but not that many words rhyme with battle and they've all been played
right...
see ya look of `dread` as my words pierce ya `head`//3
rearrange ya name, subtract an 'e' ya cant fire back cuz ya got `NO-LED`(yup)//4
Ha, ok. I like it.
checked ya past: "rhymes look like something you ejaculated"?//5
tryna `fly-but-your-weighted` no wonder you aint `elevated`(flyweight)*//6
Good wordplay here. Very nice
cat has `no-right` tryna win `dis-fight` wit rhymes `so-trite`//7
'DeLeon' has neither the roar 'of the lion' or it's `fierce-bite`(damn!)//8
Ha, nice personal, showing some knowledge
tha fury...
you a contradictory `fable` meanin ya story's `real-unstable`//9
even if you DJ'ed you still couldnt `turn-tha-tables`( )////10
Damn, nice closwer
DeLeon -
dogg,who you think this is - its time to put this fag to bed/
cuz i just emptied 17 from my clip-- to tha back of your head/
weak opener. No one cares about your guns
Katz is like DAMN! Deleons do-ne lost it(gone crazy!)/
1 shot from my nine 'll have you leakin li-ke a faucet/
eh, nothing special here
we know im at tha top so drop tha mic and walk/
before I shove it up your ass- so it amplifies your talk/
Good stuff. subtle but nice
your game aint shit bitch-it's all static/
Im takin breaths away so you can call me an asthmatic/
Very nice again, you should have started out with rhymes like this
I spit shit so hard it cripples your spine/
gettin out of line-liable to get you encased in tha pine(casket)/
nothing spectacular here
you fuckin with the wrong man-im reppin Lyrical D/
This shits over motha fucka-R. I. P/
All RIP rhymes are officially played
Well I have to give it to Furiouso. I didn't mean to sound harsh on DeLeons verse but from some of the lines I can tell he can do better. He just has to get the opening and closing up to the caliber of the middle part of the verse.
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