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Old 05-07-04, 12:35 PM   #10
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both wereof mediocre quality, those ares used the most imaginative use of punches. i reackon he used RAM's name to perfection, though it should be backed with a complex flow eg: ''R.A.M? Hmm... Ok, let me try to figure this one out /
R.eady, A.im, M.asturbate like when your boy's jerking in your mouth/'' the word you used to support the annagram of ram's name should be more of a punch.
though all in all it was decent.

RAm's verse was also not bad, but he made a typical 'newbie' mistake, most if not all his punches werent directed straight at are, and so he couldnt capitalise.

my vote: ares
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