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Old 05-07-04, 12:54 PM   #5
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From: London, me dun tell ya!!!
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Decent battle

Breakdown:
UZI
Took a lil while to get into his shyt, not really offensive initially. Could see what he was trying to do with the repeat lines, but it weren't working for me.
It was okay thru to da middle, I thought things were looking up with the
"im mutch kooler than ure ski mask player hater
eat a dick while i get this paper
and ull probably get this one more sooner than later
and dont say whack rappers names its not in ma nature "
I liked that bit - good wordplay and quite offensive/funny.
But from then on was just okay again. I'm sure this weren't his best spit, showed flashes (or a flash) of class.

N-Sight
Would have preferred you to put it in a 'better' bar structure, cabn't ereally tell if it would have flowed well as an audio... but you got in with good lines a bit earlier than UZI;
"I dunno what you and Solo got in..but my nigga whupp'd u like slave wit stolen cotton..-" - liked it.
Not to mention
"Post victory on the door you still couldn't shut-it
..ur wack structure is buggin' me like butt-itch" - that's what I'm talking about, funny and dismissive of your opponent! That, along with a great flow, is what I look for...
What is "plummage"? Do you mean plumage, as in a bird's feathers (which is pronounced different and therefore wouldn't have rhymed) or plumbing, as in sewers, which is a different word and tehrefore wouldn't rhyme - however you slice it, it don't rhyme!!
Good finish tho -
"Who tha fuck respect ya text..no one cuz ur credibility is in check, u owe-one (0-1)..-
And I'm here to collect ur soul..crack ur chest open to make it flow son..-"

decent finisher

My vote???

N-Sight


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