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Old 05-07-04, 01:31 PM   #18
Proliphik
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From: London, me dun tell ya!!!
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Can I vote on this without being branded a hater????? Who knows, who cares, I'ma do what I'ma do.

Relatively decent battle

BigNeks
Now, just cos ur my boy, I ain't gonna go easy on you (remember the "Will Smith" line I dropped on u in Diss the Rapper above??? LOL All in da name of cypha, tho!)

Opener was fair, not great or inspiring, but fair.
The "come BITE my stuff, it's the only way you'll be sick/
u get your ass out like your MUM, and take 50 Dicks//" line worked, simple & affective.
Decent again thru the middle, not mind blowing, but decent.
Picked yourself up a bit with the:
"lyrically damage ya, with this shit that spawns like illborns/
metaphorically snipe ya, and leave your corpse all sore and malformed/" that was aight.
Now I can sort of understand the fallout from the 9/11 lines. We Brits, so we don't appreciate 'fully' how that affected folks. I've been to NYC for work - I was there a short while after that fateful day (we used to have an office 3 blocks away from Ground Zero). NYC was amazingly united in the aftermath of that tragedy - it was something to behold, and it will always be a sore subject. Not your fault, Bigs, but you'll know (we'll ALL know, I'm talking UK MCs) in the future to steer clear of the topic.
Fortunately, you finished with a good line:
" throw this finishin blow to the back of your skull/
2k wants to stick his Dick in, but your ass is too FULL" - 2 in 1 hit
Not your best spit, but adequate

Maddog
"Long line, short line" opener - you know I don't go for that...
"Short line, long line" follow up - has the penny dropped yet?
" see that Big neck strain when u try to spit verbs/
But i cant understand ur words" - see, this was almost a good line, a standout line, I mean, but you needed to fill out the second line, bludz!
Kinda below-par thru till the last bar:
"All my rhymes rhyme...now who lacks the lyrical weed?/ (weed = imagination)
Wanna ask ur bitch bout that baby...coz im sure he aint ur seed/" - I liked this........ but since when has weed meant imagination?????
I've seen you spit alot better than this - you didn't do yourself justice here.

My (hate-free) vote?

Goes to the Nek.

PS I don't want any of you bitin' that "Kinda below-par thru till the last bar" line I dropped in my critique...... (that was a joke, just in case y'all get it twisted!!!)

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