you think my shots cant hurt you? shyt i just shot and murked you//
and im droppin more fat shyt than what your mom gave birth to//

^^ OUCH! ...lol

u runnin the streetz? bytch please..only with me chasin you poppin the 5th//
somebody must'a "chopped off ya lips" cuz your "mouthin off" talkin that shyt//

^^ good wordplay and punch

light you up like halogens..ILL disses...u missed all of them//
you could probably spit better if u just quit swallowin//

^^ nice hard closer...but kinda played wit the swallowin ref.

When if flow i cause more contreversey than Kobe's rape cases and anger more people than eminems rascist statements/Lets face it im on top you stuck in tigger's basement

^^^ I don't get it...where's the end rhyme for "peoples"...that kinda sets up the punch


ugh
if Nick Cannon was your newborn son/ Im so contreversial i put more graphics in yah then feed the children television specials/ yes sir im nice, too cool me off its gonna take a lifesize can of Old Spice/
^^^^& I can't follow ur flow son...and that's not my fault

srry...

Vote: FLow...better flow/structure/rhyming/wordplay


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