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Old 05-07-04, 02:31 PM   #1
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From: Home Bean&Brock 617-508
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Simply I was feelin Trini's flow better.
It worried me somewhere in da middle wit lines like:
"But I come to splice mics nice,don't bother fuck me bout my computer science,
I rest thick glasses on the table and and fuck yo fat mom twice//"
(Ok then whateva dat shit meant)
But yo set it off in da begining.
It was fallin off toward toward the end too but your closer was cool:
"Like your father who had you playin tha tony and angela game a la who's the boss"
(that was aight)

Dawg:
I wasn't really feelin your verse at all.
I was feelin da opener:
"Yo get the beat goin/
from this point on theres no stoppin/
nigga don't push me to da limit/
I gon pop yo ass and your mother go witness it..."
(???wheres tha flow)

I wasn't feelin your closer:
My friend sold ya weed sayin hydroponic was 10 bucks a joint/
I think in this battle I proven ma point/
Nigga go home you can't beat me/
Don't believe tha votes'll prove it homie."
(not this vote)
Yo daddy you just kept it too simple nimean.
Nothin against you I think you coulda stepped it up a little better.
But good shit 2 both of yall.

vote=TRINI
yo why don't yall swing thru and peep this here.
http://community.rapbattles.com/sho...462#post1272462