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Old 05-07-04, 04:17 PM   #38
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Bar by bar...

Laugh cause you're seldom felt...I'd whoop your ass so go run and tell
Plus you're nice wit a mic device....when you hand it to someone else
Hahaha...nice opener...good punch...8/10
He still remains to lag.........couldn't man up so he changed to drag
This dude's from Calgary.......no wonder he's considered a flamin fag
Good personal...punch coulda had betta wordplay...seemed forced...but good meta....6/10
Who ya runnin to?.....ain't gotta leave ya abused wit somethin new
Cause he's still nursin the wounds from gettin booted from his crew
HAHAHA...hot....10/10
Down to battle me?.....I'll have you lose weight like countin calories
Leavin you in awe of me...like when Bill Gates announced his salary
Nice meta...decent punch....7/10
I'm givin you lots of lectures....it's bout time you stoped your effort
You always wanted to make it...I'm just helpin you drop your record
Good punch and closer....8/10

Verse Score - 39/50 = 78%

Good verse overall...couple bars weren't as great as the others but nothing bad....solid verse with funny meta's and good hard hittin punches....wordplay was straight....flow was good...good drop...

Enygma, 7 losses...this bitch still gettin some praise,
1 week title reign...yur 20 minutes r up, no 1 will rememba the 'nygma days'
Not that great of a personal...coulda gone places wit it but bad wordplay and it was stretched...4/10
Can't take ur eyes off my keystyle, you stare for 182 blinks,
Ur rhymes don't affect people, too weak, like watered down drinks,
Okay meta...but no hard punch....5/10
'Crhyme Syndicate', ha these half-wits r the king of the cirlce jirk,
A femcee asked to join, they said only if u buy a strap-on first,
Still not feelin you....5/10
Nygma's talent is exactly like my sig....nothing,
He's so outta hip hop...he thought running his mouth was blunting,
Hahaha...gettin betta....8/10
I'ma fuck you up verbally, til u lookin like Rick Rubin,
I'm the DICTATOR like Castro, and you're just a dirty fuckin cuban,
Don't like these meta's...stretched too....5/10
Bitch you're the worst emcee 'vet' I've ever heard,
It's just us two, but in this battle you'll finish third,
A lil betta....7/10
I call your crew 'The Seinfelds', cause your a bunch of jokes,
U threw me a free pass by you, I'll catch it everytime like JJ Stokes,
Now this was a good bar....9/10
Nothing is better, then what you scribbled wit dat pen,
I guess your falling off the cliff, of your wits end.
Not that great...6/10

Verse Score - 49/80 = 61%

Aight your verse wasnt as good as i expected it to be...Just boring punches and meta's....couple bars were nice but u have to come hard against high level emcees....lot of ya shit was stretched wit fucked up ya flow....so work on that....jus keep elevatin and use harder meta's....

Vote - enygma....keep droppin yall....nice battle but expected both emcees to come a lot harder...
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