I have to agree its unfortuante that you don't get points for storytellin. Fine Mind, you need somthing other than mettas to win a battle. Punches all your rhymes were like this
this boy can't rap, he's like steped back for my foots ready to stamp/
-Where is the punch??

Shady, I've some of your other shit and I've seen you come hotter, it started out good, but then got weak, still funny though! When you were talkin all that shit about his mom and dad, but try to swtich it up a bit, if you had been battle'n someone else they may have beat you cause they came more versatile.

Vote cause of punches goes to Shady

Oh and vote on my!!!! NOW!!!!
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=122892