OK.. ill that structure is annoying, but I guess some people like it so whatever. You had some nice punches, the opener with the name play and the closer were pretty tight. I don't know why the hell you are riding Native's dick in your battle.. that was just weak as fuck.

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I don`t need a comeback.. I jus` wipe it from ya mom`s chin"

that was funny when i first saw it in that thread... but bleh. still decent verse though.

Prem, you really would have had this one, if not for lines 3-6, which sucked hard. The rhymes were week, the punches were bleh.. and I think he pulled off a bitch move because I don't see an avatar so I don't get the 4th bar. Anyway, your closing bars were pretty nice, so if you had been consistent with that level, you would have won.

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