breakdown for illtalic:
flow

retty good nothing complex but no off spots 6/10
volcab:good job nothing really to say 6/10
punches:not too many lines that were direct or atleast not played best line,"Cos ya premonition of winnin` is no good fella" not a bad name flip 6/10
overall:18/30
breakdown for premanition:
flow:nice use nothing too complex but good job 6/10
volcab:slightly better then your openent still room for improvment 7/10
punches:best line,"Audio out of the question….even ya txt ain’t straight….(italic)" original name flip good job at staying on your opponent and not straying too much 7/10
overall:20/30
vote--premanition