breakdown for marvolous:
flow
retty good a couple of lines i thought ws alittle off but overall good job 6/10
volcab:nice use here good balance with the rest of the verse 7/10
punches:some alright lines i liked,"be4 i have u and ya family makin out more "wheels" than a intersection" just cause it flipped the words i gave you to use good job 7/10
overall:20/30 nice verse
breakdown for VC:
flow:no off spots through the whole thing some good internal rhyming in spots too good job 7/10
volcab:a whole level above your oppenent some of the best this week in the league no hint of being basic at all 9/10
punches:good job at keeping on your oppenent no quotes cause the whole verse was full of good punches 7/10
overall:23/30
vote--close battle one of the better ones i've read this week it was close but the volcab use and punches had VC run away with it vote=VC