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		seemed like you two aren't trying, i expected more from both of you. 
 
breakdown for yungsir: 
 
flow:choppy for the most of it you really gotta work on this 4/10 
 
volcab:basic array lots of room for improvment keep working on it 5/10 
 
punches:nothing too direct mainly lines bout yourself being better and some played references to calling him a pussy you need some work here 5/10 
 
overall:14/30 i see that maybe you could be something with some work but not this week  
 
breakdown for jae cyph: 
 
flow:basic nothing too special 5/10 
 
volcab:basic here too you didn't seem to try 5/10 
 
punches:a couple of alright lines not too many though best,"I`m Wondering If That Was A Battle Verse. . Or A Guide On How Not To Write.." i thought that was funny 6/10  
 
overall: 16/30 
 
vote--jae cyph hope to see better from both of you next week 
		
	
		
		
		
		
			
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