i changed my title !!
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seemed like you two aren't trying, i expected more from both of you.
breakdown for yungsir:
flow:choppy for the most of it you really gotta work on this 4/10
volcab:basic array lots of room for improvment keep working on it 5/10
punches:nothing too direct mainly lines bout yourself being better and some played references to calling him a pussy you need some work here 5/10
overall:14/30 i see that maybe you could be something with some work but not this week
breakdown for jae cyph:
flow:basic nothing too special 5/10
volcab:basic here too you didn't seem to try 5/10
punches:a couple of alright lines not too many though best,"I`m Wondering If That Was A Battle Verse. . Or A Guide On How Not To Write.." i thought that was funny 6/10
overall: 16/30
vote--jae cyph hope to see better from both of you next week
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win loss record 18-19 with 7 k.o's
and sign up for the battle league would yeah, also show up if your already in the league
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