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Old 05-07-04, 06:19 PM   #13
DirtBoy69
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seemed like you two aren't trying, i expected more from both of you.

breakdown for yungsir:

flow:choppy for the most of it you really gotta work on this 4/10

volcab:basic array lots of room for improvment keep working on it 5/10

punches:nothing too direct mainly lines bout yourself being better and some played references to calling him a pussy you need some work here 5/10

overall:14/30 i see that maybe you could be something with some work but not this week

breakdown for jae cyph:

flow:basic nothing too special 5/10

volcab:basic here too you didn't seem to try 5/10

punches:a couple of alright lines not too many though best,"I`m Wondering If That Was A Battle Verse. . Or A Guide On How Not To Write.." i thought that was funny 6/10

overall: 16/30

vote--jae cyph hope to see better from both of you next week
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