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Old 05-07-04, 06:20 PM   #17
E Looch
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ok wack battle shit was lopsided like triple ns head


ase your verse first off was ass cheeks she coulda queefed an had better shit then that but ummm your opener was bad against yourself lmfao dont do that shti an exspect to win and your closer didnt rhyme shit wasnt very well worded anyways and the rest of your verse was hangin ass out like a bottomless diaper elevate on your punchlines RHYMIN PERSONALS AND TRY ACTUALLY USIN WORDPLAY FOR YOUR PUNCHS elevate brah

dp i didnt read much cause it was over after the first few lines but um the opener wasnt that great decent an closer was pretty nice i was fealin it good way to whipe ya hands off and the rest of your verse was off and on nice verse though overall no punchs where really sorry and some where pretty tight

vote dp
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