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Old 05-07-04, 06:27 PM   #11
DirtBoy69
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From: Kincardine Ontario
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breakdown for native:

flow:i liked this part of your verse it worked well in my eyes some alright internal rhyming and so forth 8/10

volcabretty basic array here not too much to say 6/10

punches:you address yung duke almost every line but none of it was really too special alot of played ideas 6/10

overall:22/30 good verse

breakdown for yung duke:

flow:worked but nothing too complex 6/10

volcab:basic array i've seen better from you 6/10

punches:alittle mroe direct then native but still nothing too great i'm not gonna quote anything 5/10

overall:17/30

vote--native took this
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