breakdown for native:
flow:i liked this part of your verse it worked well in my eyes some alright internal rhyming and so forth 8/10
volcab
![Stick Out Tongue](/images/smilies/tongue.gif)
retty basic array here not too much to say 6/10
punches:you address yung duke almost every line but none of it was really too special alot of played ideas 6/10
overall:22/30 good verse
breakdown for yung duke:
flow:worked but nothing too complex 6/10
volcab:basic array i've seen better from you 6/10
punches:alittle mroe direct then native but still nothing too great i'm not gonna quote anything 5/10
overall:17/30
vote--native took this