here we go, yo yo
hey mixx, what happened? what you doin with that napkin?
you must of blown a load listenin to me rappin.
what was the point of this line. was this a punch. this did not shit on your opponents ability.
Im sick of guys like you, tryin to call me out.
i guess i'll break yo jaw so you cant open your mouth.
Weak. but i get what you saying
sometimes i feel crazy, cuz i got so many tricks,
like turnin my opponent from man to chex mixx.
Probably your best punch. Weak. Flow was off
so my suggestion is to save yo ass
and not respond, cuz im way to fast.
Is this a battle?
you can have a head start and i'll still blow right past
and break both yo legs and sign my name on yo cast.
I guess your on this site for comedy
you break like glass, and my rhymes stain like grass.
so just know your place, because i flow with class.
This is too basic

Your Turn

Jacket put off hittin puberty, cause he thought it would fight back..
So i'll have a bullet in ya esophogus use ya ribs as thumb tacks..
Fair punch.
Dogg im tha greatest dont ever think of beatin me..
Push ya button for better verses startin wit da delete key..
Nice. you really shitted on his skill
bitch u cant touch me, I give more fun to tha ladies than truth or dare..
This nigga is so dumb his learnin curve is a square..
Really put a hurt on his knowledge
Journey first, second time is death so u request and die..
Hand-cuff ya skull and arrest ya eyes..
weak. But i find it funny
Ill pull out ya liver and lungs so easily makes me think you a tissue box..
Just like a magazine, when no-one likes you the issue stops..
I think i get the idea of bringing a punch
This is your last errection, cuz evaluation is jus stringing you along like shoe laces..
I chew faces, jacket wants to be straight so bad he's been asked to use
braces..
Weak. but i get it.

Jacket: What you need to work on is flow. vocabulary, lyrical content. you had one personal...that check mixx but it wasnt a good punch. and punches is another thing. No multies...elevate seriously...you got the funny part on point

Mixx: flow was a lot better than jacket, also your vocabulary. i dont really see any personals...you had his name in your verse but they were not personal. you really got the idea of battle rapping....workon multies and wordplay. you got potential so elevate. check out my battle with disasterpiece and pm me telling me what you think. peace
vote/ mixx

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