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Old 05-07-04, 07:19 PM   #21
FLooZe
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hmm ok,lets see,

BIG NEK: your verse was real tight and well structures,complex wordplay,good punches and flow.i was feelin your verse with lines such as:lyrically damage ya, with this shit that spawns like illborns/
metaphorically snipe ya, and leave your corpse all sore and malformed/
very good line right here^^ but there were some i wasnt feeling too too much:when your writin your shit, u use a crayola/
u jus a kid, and im tellin you that its over/
u think your Jay-Z, frontin like you that HOVA/
this line was pretty elementary.
overall:7/10.real good

MAD DOG:i wasnt feeling your verse very much,rough flow,wordplay quite simple,um,structure good tho,um not too too
solid overall.examples of rough flow and simple wordplay are such as this:Now i told u in the beginnin that i'd be winnin/
But i guess u werent listenin/
and this All my rhymes rhyme...now who lacks the lyrical weed?/ (weed = imagination)
Wanna ask ur bitch bout that baby...coz im sure he aint ur seed
but whatever not that horrible of a verse:
overall:5/10.average.work on your wordplay and your flow

FINAL VOTE: BIG NEK
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